awesome work Andy, they both look tops. Does the left one have a P90 neck and the other a single ? If you want to do away with a pickguard you can drill the neck pup wires straight down the centre via the neck pocket. You have been a busy boy. How much more fun are scratch builds ? You have 100% of the input on the entire body shape/cavities etc
Have you drilled the jack holes ? They are quite long. I use a 22mm spade drill. You don't have to drill the hole length. Just needs to be deep enough for the jack. I just drill a 10mm drill for the wires once deep enough for the jack lugs