I like it, its got a dirty sort of organic feel to it. Not a factory perfect replicated ad infinitum burst job, but (to me anyway) it looks that the guitar has had 10,00 ciggies rested around its edge while being played in a bar or something.
Either that or it has been soaked edge inwards in ink or oil, or played and handled by dirty hands in a sharecroppers barn or some such in a old school blues session. I really like it mate, you're going great!