It looks better, though there's still a slightly suspect bit in the middle. You don't have to attach everything to the same blob. I normally spread my connections out round the edge if I can.

I notice you've got two capacitors in series (this halves the capacitor value). Obviously by design, but it wont take much for the middle connection to touch the pot casing and ground itself so you revert to the full single capacitor value. A bit of heat shrink tubing over the two soldered legs will prevent that happening, otherwise some insulating tape will work (though it tends to fall off over time but is better than nothing).