G'day again Oli,

Have you had a look at Into The Night in a spectrum analyser, I use Voxengo SPAN which is free.

There's a lot or rumble right down at the bottom coming in with the kick, try a high pass on your EQ at 40Hz on each track but that one in particular.

In that track there's a lot of stuff happening down there and it's only inaudible mud which muddies the bass & kick and takes away headroom that could be used elsewhere.

Also have you mixed everything straight down the middle.

I'm liking this one a lot but the main voice seems crowded with too much in the same frequency range occupying the same sonic space.

ie. synth, lead vocal and harmony voices all down the middle.

Percussion and bass down the middle with the lead vocal and the guitars, synths & harmonies panned off to the sides to make a nest for the lead voice, then bring your lead instruments into the middle in the solo sections.

You could also try pulling the snare back a bit and add a bit of verb to it

JMTBW. feel free to ignore