Wiring question here:

This is the diagram I'm using for the P90's. I want to try vintage style with independent controls in the middle position.
Question is: Will this work using the main diagram and the smaller diagram in the bottom right corner? Not sure about the earth leads either.

Suggestions, confirmations or outright laughter are all appreciated.

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